"Torn"

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  • Confusion

    "Torn"

    In it i gave it my all, my life, my soul,

    In the end my life it did moled,

    Gods grace he surely showed,

    but God i am asking, "Why am i still feeling so ToRn?"



    ToRn between the perfect life it seemed before,

    And In 08 when my eyes u finally open therefore,

    Now i am asking is it worth it all or worth the lost,

    But then i remember u dieing that day at the cross,

    So i ask myself, why am i being so weak,

    When so many years u have been so meak,



    Me Being ToRn does mean i wont give up

    So this fight i know i am now stuck,

    So i will go on and stand and give u praise,

    Until that day u decide to take this all away

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    boriquamorena commented on "Torn"

    06-26-2009

    Your poem is very deep on so many levels. Whom are you speaking of or should I say to? You are truly blessed to not be a poet. Your truly blessed.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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