Rain

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  • Emotional

    Rain

    Dark grey clouds,
    Sneak like panthers
    A bolt of light,
    Midnight thunder crashes,
    Droplets dripping,
    Seeps into the earth,
    Splattering a face,
    Moving slowly through a soul,
    Heart races,
    Dripping finger tips,
    Take a hand,
    Fire rushes through blood,
    Sliding down a precious face,
    Body drenched,
    Deep into the eyes,
    You feel vunerable,
    As souls intertwine like a rose.

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    drewking commented on Rain

    12-13-2008

    awesome poem,, deep...

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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