Release my soul

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  • Anger

    Release my soul

    anger rushes over her she cries out, waiting,
     is there ever a hero?
     No!
     she sits and waits to be swept away by an angel
     a release of a soul into a new place
     no more pain

    when she gets there she waits for her happiness

    but, it never comes

    how can this happen

    she asks an angel

    "where am i going to find happiness"

    "not here" they answer

    she weeps for her life she has taken

     

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    Shay86 commented on Release my soul

    02-14-2012

    Wow!!! I really did not expect that. Great poem I wish it had more to it, but it was still great. Good job!!
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    poetryofemotion

    02/14/2012

    i wrote it quickly before i went to school, thanks for commenting :)

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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