Remedy for a dream

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Remedy for a dream

She woke me this morning, early
"Mommy, Mommy, Mommy!"
Sobbing and frightened from a nightmare
I rushed in to see what was wrong
Holding her anguished little body
She shook and cried while I rocked her
Needing far more comfort than a few words
I took her back into my room
Holding her small hand and smoothing her damp brow
She snuggled close beside me
Sharing my pillow, breathing slowing down
I marveled that I was the one she ran to for comfort
This sweet little child of mine.

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bandit1192 commented on Remedy for a dream

09-08-2009

I remember those times. Right after their mom left and I was all they had. I learned quickly, the most important thing I could do was let them know I was there and would never leave. Good poem, TS

danmartyjake1 commented on Remedy for a dream

09-03-2009

This is a sweet and loving piece that I enjoyed. i have felt these same emotions as I comforted my son in the night. Thanks for sharing.

photochick commented on Remedy for a dream

09-02-2009

this is very sweet great job with painting a picture for the reader great imagery i look forward to reading more of your poems keep up the great writing

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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