sad and don't know why

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    sad and don't know why

     I feel so sad and I don't know why.
    I feel down almost every day of my life.
    I have a void in my heart that can never be filled.
    My heart is hollow and no one wants to get in.
    I feel mad for no reason and I have no one to calm
    My nerves.

    I keep wondering if I'll grow up to be an Emotional bum. It's hard to feel confident about yourself
    When the one two people who ever believed in you Are never there.
    It's hard to say "yes I can" when everyone around you think otherwise.
    And are always ready to see you fail

    I feel lonely and unhappy
    I keep going around and around
    Looking for a shoulder to cry one
    But it's all like a circle.
    I feel like drowning and no one ever comes to
    My rescue.
    Everyday I want to scream but what's the use
    For no one will ever hear.
    It's like I was born in loneliness and raised in The dark.
    For my life is filled with pain and unbearable Shock.

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    sandro007 commented on sad and don't know why

    08-27-2010

    thanks :)
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    DeepEclipse commented on sad and don't know why

    08-27-2010

    (When the one two people who ever believed in you Are never there.) - Damn that's true. Leaving one to feel like a ghost. Drifter. True emotion of a longing existence. How can one go one when you lose those that know you best. Good write man
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    ReelLife commented on sad and don't know why

    02-19-2010

    As much as I like this poem and the emotion that was place in it, I hope that you sincerely have good friends around you!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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