Shadows in the night

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    Shadows in the night
    I have shadows in the night

    when I sleep I see shadows
    shadows are scary sometimes
    But there are good shadows too
    shadows in the night are nice to have
    some are good shadows and some
    are bad shadows that will do damage
    But shadows are like people they all went
    have shadows that will show up in lights
    But if one is not there you wonder where your shadow of the night

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    SClark20xx commented on Shadows in the night

    01-21-2009

    Good context, but the structure and timing is undefined. Try to use punctuations to add drama to certain words.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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