Silence tells me

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    I don't know what to say here but that was my third one to do.

    Silence tells me

     Your silence tells me all i need to know.
    I will take you any were you want to go.
    Just close your eyes.
    Maybe you will think of me one day.
    Cause your love is getting me behind.
    That I can't sleep tonight.
    Hear my voice if you care.
    Please hold my hand so we can dance together.
    Never cry cause I can never see you crying.
    Now take my hand and let us dance together till the music stops.
    Till we fill this pain we feel.

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    Nataliecuth commented on Silence tells me

    11-28-2010

    wow, i really like this. the feeling i get from it is powerful. keep writing!
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    OmarMounir

    11/28/2010

    Thanks that really means a lot to me specially when its coming from you :D-/-

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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