slip silent

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    slip silent

     slip silent into the mist
    a darkness lurks behind your kiss
    your smile now vacant, scaring me
    slip silent into the sea

    turn slowly out of my hold
    your warming skin has now gone cold
    your dreams elusive, floating free
    slip silent into the sea

    I'm drowning in these unseen waves
    the darkness pitch as pauper's graves
    the love that breathed new life in me
    slips silent into the sea

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    lesabug commented on slip silent

    07-08-2009

    Deep feelings are conveyed in this writing, feelings of sadness I think, but I love the way you have with words. Keep writing!
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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