So Close,So Far Away

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    So Close,So Far Away

     Even though you are so close
    You seem so far away
    I long to hold you in my arms
    With every passing day.

    It may not happen often
    Although i wish it could
    I love your hugs and kisses
    'Cause they make me feel so good.

    So embrace me in your arms tonight
    Make love with all your heart
    When the morning sun arises
    We can make a brand new start.

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    HarverTomsson commented on So Close,So Far Away

    06-09-2009

    Nice attention to rhythm without forcing the rhyme. Sounds like a wistful lover wanting commitment.
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    luvmygt3

    06/09/2009

    At the time i did.I guess you could say i like to write corny little sonnets.

    luvmygt3

    06/09/2009

    At the time i did.I guess you could say i like to write corny little sonnets.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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