So What

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    So What

    So what I want to be pampered,spoiled,
    doted on,and catered to.... What's so bad about that?
    So what I want to have my cake,
    and eat it too... Why give me cake; then take it back?
    So what if I think it's all about me-
    is your love really love or is it jealousy?
    So what I said or wrote some things,I really didn't mean..
    I'm an imperfect human, Not a machine!
    So what I like to be taken care of,
    what's wrong with being kept?
    While you analyzed and disected our love,
    I silently wept and I still haven't slept!
    So you say I don't know what love is,
    because i desire things...
    but do you know what love is,or the rewards that true love brings?
    The world is made of queens&kings,
    will you denounce your crown... or will you be my wings?
    Have you always treated me like you know-
    how to appreciate....Maybe I tend to use"things" to validate and compensate!
    Your right about love; it's not "tit for tat"...
    Or you used me for this and you used me for that!
    Love is: I'll do anything in my power...
    to help you if I can,
    Love is being that strong tower...
    that never takes back an outstretched hand.
    So what you think I'm a material girl...we live in a material world,
    and what's that got to do with me loving you.....
    'cause I'd take care of you if you needed me too!
    So you say keep it real... but you can't handle real,
    If you could you would know the deal...
    and atleast try to understand the way I think & feel.
    So what I want to be pampered,spoiled,doted on,and catered to.
    That's the kind of love I require,
    and "I" understand it works both ways,Boo,
    'Cause I'm an idealist Not A Liar!!


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    Tempestlady commented on So What

    07-29-2009

    Very up in your face, kind of honesty. The anger and defense of what you need is admirable. Keep it up. Write on.....

    Phoenix9 commented on So What

    12-01-2008

    great emotion with true feelings

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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