something was wrong.

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    something was wrong.

    Sunday, October 12, 2008

    I awoke this mid morning with darkness all around me.
    To open the door as the coldness krept in.
    There was a bright shining sun but i could feel no warmth.
    A realization hit me then that there was something wrong.

    So i stepped outside to look more closely
    .At the world that stood in front of me then.
    As the sun touched my face i could not feel its warmth.
    There were leaves blowing in the wind .
    And i could not feel a breeze.
    A realization hit me then that there was something wrong.

    And so sitting on my porch i begin to wonder about allThings that are dear to me.
    I realize at that moment that there is something wrong.

    Something missing.
    Something lost.
    Something a part of me.
    What could it be ?

    Confused as hell i go back in the house.
    To face myself as i often do.
    And looking in the mirror at the long older face .
    Was like looking at only half of the picture.

    my SON was missing !

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    ccslim commented on something was wrong.

    04-19-2009

    The feeling of unknown drawing to a conclusion. Good inner touch!

    litldeer commented on something was wrong.

    12-03-2008

    Write to me at litldeer1@netzero.net. I would like to talk to you more. I want to try to understand this poem in more detail. I loved it. It brought tears to my eyes.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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