Succubus

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    I made it up off the top of my head.. hope you guys like it

    Succubus
    A broken glass, stained with blood
    a broken heart, stained by you
    A whole new fear, I cling to
    A whole new hell, from me to you

    The darkness comes; light is gone
    Hate rises, as the moon falls
    Your nothing but ash; a pile of dust
    I sweep you up, and yet you stay

    Ashes are left, memories of hell
    These things I found in you
    I am lost, for I am ill
    you are a succubus

    I'm not well, I am sick
    Demented is what I am
    Because of you, I am dead
    but only on the inside

    I am dead, and so are you
    at least I have my heart
    unlike you, I'm not cold
    you are demon-scum

    Your hands are red, with my blood
    My bed is empty, only tears
    Your bed is tainted, as you are
    I pray that you will die

    Memories haunt me, don't they you?
    Or are you still to cold
    You see nothing, I see shadows
    you're still a succubus

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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