Suicide Is A Sin

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    Suicide Is A Sin

     You're dead now, and you begin to rise.

    You're leaving the ground where your body now lies.

    You find yourself in a tunnel, but where is the light?

    You follow the tunnel but somthing's not right.

    You're falling again, and you were doing so well, but suicide is a sin and youre going straight down to hell.

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    Solaris commented on Suicide Is A Sin

    09-28-2013

    You apear to have an issue with suicide and a hatred which must come from being angry at somone in your life who may have commited such act. If so who and are they too now in hell as you so adimately seem to place anyone who has done so?
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