Surrender

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    Surrender

    SURRENDER
    By: Saelynne

    Falling, heart racing, scared.
    Being caught, being found.
    Eyes gazing wide at my fate.

    Exhilarated, Overwhelmed but not wanting to let go;
    caught up in this wonderful web of emotions.
    Delighted yet unsure of what will happen.
    I let go as my worries are cast in the wind.

    Embracing, accepting what is.
    Not wanting to turn back; not wanting to turn away from all that I feel.
    My heart, screaming overjoyed.
    I surrender. I surrender.
    I am yours.

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    BadBadBear commented on Surrender

    07-04-2010

    A very well written masterpiece you share! ****************BBBear

    Phoenix9 commented on Surrender

    12-17-2008

    very well written, more please

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