Poem Commentary

My long distance boyfriend and I just broke up. This is a song I wrote. The first verse is how he wanted me to come home to see him (I lived in Pennsylvania with him, but moved to Florida) We never knew when we'd see each other again. It was all how we promised to never break up. At night we'd put our phones on speaker and I’d hum to him. We were so young and innocent. When we first met, we were so silly together. We went to a concert together shortly after knowing each other (where I fell in love with him) when I had fallen a little further back in the crowd. He was up front when he grabbed my hand and pulled me up to the front with him. In that moment, everything went slow-mo and we locked eyes and everyone around him disappeared. In the end, I hurt him, of course. It basically ended up being a one-sided relationship, with my efforts being the only ones put into the relationship. I'm not sorry because I have found someone who treats me like the angel I am.