Television is Just More Fun

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    Television is Just More Fun

    Your fish greeted me before you did
    possibly forming circles about my ankles and
    adoring the shag with sweating fins
    I might even say I enjoyed the pleasant cackle
    of water that surfaced, frothy, from the plush carpet as
    my heels violated it in my dreamy venture
    towards the kitchen
    Little eyes gravitated, enthusiastic,
    maybe expectant too (I thought I'd mention both adjectives, you'd like that)
    I'd attract similar attention from you if you'd
    strategically planted holes in your thick, dark, gills
    Instead your convulsing body lashes out on the carpet,
    obeying the final commands of your drifting consciousness
    until I can see the seeds climb out of your mouth
    in a finished form
    Healthy emerald blades, frazzled with blood, nod to the
    superiority of the ceiling fan.

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    mrobb6488 commented on Television is Just More Fun

    04-22-2009

    I'm having a difficult time trying to understand this. I love the way that you write but your idea isn't really clear seems almost like a bad nightmare. M-Robb

    brownsugar commented on Television is Just More Fun

    01-26-2009

    I like your spirit and your imagination but I'm having a hard embracing the meaning of this poem.

    THEWIND2 commented on Television is Just More Fun

    01-23-2009

    I enjoy your deep style myself very amusing

    Meetthemonster commented on Television is Just More Fun

    01-13-2009

    nice i really injoyed this one. thanks was worth my yime. check out mine. but mines does suck but i wrote it in about 5 mins. so haha later

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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