Tell me that you love me :: zealous123 :: Original Poetry

Tell me that you love me

Tell me that you love me        Tell me that you love me
All the time                                even if I had a dime

Tell me that you love me         Tell me that you love me
When i have no car                   If Im no star

Tell me that you love me          Tell me that you love me
When my change is strange      Though my money is funny

Tell me that you love me           Tell me that you love me
To build my esteem                   Just so I can dream

Tell me that you love me            Tell me that you love me
When i assail                            If if fail

Tell me that you love me             Tell me that you love me
Cause you're my queen                For only you i fien

Tell me that you love me               Tell me that you love me
When we having fun                     cause when you smile you
                                                     shine like the sun

Tell me that you love me                Tell me that you love me
cause what we have is tru             Cause I love you

Tell me that you love me                 Tell me that you love me
Cause you're my bu

written 3/25/08

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Vee commented on Tell me that you love me 09-30-2009: Love is an active word, what do you DO to be loved. There are many different knids of love. The one that's being loved knows it and rarely need it told so many times but them again, Tell me you love me just because...; Reply to Comment

zealous123 09/30/2009: thanks for the love appreciate that

Sydney commented on Tell me that you love me 09-06-2009: this is a great piece. i went with the flow of it. a great romantic piece. dont stop expressing yourself and dont stop writing.; Reply to Comment

zealous123 09/06/2009: thanx for being real,

zealous123 09/06/2009: thanx for the love, i really, really thanx u

Vonn commented on Tell me that you love me 09-04-2009: its so cute and simple but i'm in love with it. i love the poem and i really hope she loves u back n keep representin the pisces lol; Reply to Comment

zealous123 09/05/2009: i wrotw this cause my xwife did me wrong, so thats how i was feeln, thats real.... thanx 1 mo for the love, i will keep repping for fishes u no!!!!!!

sincere commented on Tell me that you love me 08-27-2009: I understand the need to be loved just as much as any body. and even if youre not loved, the need to hear the words. Like this one alot, keep on doing what you doing.; Reply to Comment

zealous123 08/27/2009: I wrote this poem cause my x wife left me for dead, at that time thats how i was feeln, life has gotten better since then... thanx for comment more to come... keep ur ears open

sammia commented on Tell me that you love me 08-19-2009: this is very strong and deep. wat can i say that the poets below me havent said. I love the flow of this. Great job and keep writing; Reply to Comment

zealous123 08/19/2009: thanks lol what been workn along time more to come

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Is This What You Think	1	09/05/2009
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Jus A Peek	4	08/27/2009
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LET IT OUT	3	08/11/2009
I SURVIVED IT	4	08/27/2009
Tell me that you love me	7	06/05/2009

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