That Day

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  • lovablecindy
  • my past has torn me apart, the present is driving me crazy, my future scares me to death!

That Day

The day you left my life,
a piece of my heart broke off.
The day you stopped talking to me,
I was speechless for days.
The day I lost your friendship,
my eyes filled with tears.
The last day I heard from you,
Is the day I began to fall apart

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honeypot commented on That Day

12-28-2010

This is sad but to the point a day forever burned into your heart a day your life fell apart.well done

lovablecindy

01/10/2011

thank you i appreciate ur comment

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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