the price of freedom


the price of freedom

an eagle soars with the wind beneth his wings,a soldier fights for the freedom he brings,all around him he sees death as the reper his dreams hes haunted by screams,and when awake he seeks peace by anymeans,but the trauma has built up to extreems.not knowing if he is awake or a sleep he wispers to his self you so what you reep,and all around him bodys stack deep,thinking to his self the price if freedom is steep.the memories remain weilded to his brain,like a cold hard stain.he looks around but can find no one to blame,he is overcome by shame,all in freedoms name,he feels guilty that through death freedom when you are draging your feet walking down the street,or having a good time with the people you meet,remember your freedom is sweetand did not come cheapit was a gift from some members of the elete,the sad thing is the ones that gave us freedom will never again feel complete..............THE END wrote by ozzydio18

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charlamain commented on the price of freedom


people u just could not imagine what it is like to be in war for ur country and ur country not really care about u or ur country thinking ur just another number or ur country thinking ur expendable hmmmmroooom for thought thanks for ur poem

charlamain commented on the price of freedom


amen u could not have said it any better, thank u from a vetran myself r u a veteran too u must know , take care God Bless, charlamain

mspoetris commented on the price of freedom


Well done! Freedom is my favorite word.Your eyes are wide open.You have lived,and cried the songs of freedom.Mail this to those drenched in endless sand. Great!

NayInLove commented on the price of freedom


i like this alot!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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