the shinicles
All night long and every nightWhen mama puts out the light
I see the Shinicles swimming by
As plain as day before my eyes
the shinicles
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Tags: Fantasy
When mama puts out the light
I see the Shinicles swimming by
As plain as day before my eyes
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ApaqRasgirl commented on the shinicles
10-14-2010
- ah very nice write dear, with a nice lymrical flow with your rhymes......short but it says a so much.......well done.......love asha
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spbsdude commented on the shinicles
09-30-2010
- Short and to the point. I would like to hear more about the swimming Shinicles, that would be interesting. Why do they swim?
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gogant commented on the shinicles
04-27-2010
- When the lights go out, there are all kinds of things to see...and do..........................Short and to the point.......................gogant
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