The Sullen Spirit

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    The Sullen Spirit

    The disdain of this life
    Bring me to say
    Wishing I actually have the guts to do
    Bringing a knife and just cut my pain away
    Thinking if this can show how crazy I am
    The pain I bear within
    The appearance of a monster
    Many people believe
    I just wanted to be accepted
    Wanting to be loved
    But, always ending up with jerks
    Just trying to find the light from this dispair
    Trying to find a good reason why
    I shouldn't end my own life
    But, the feelings of denial are stronger
    Startled by total shock that I did it
    The tears escape in a swift motion
    Crying out loud asking why nobody wasn't there for me.

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    cliftondurant commented on The Sullen Spirit

    05-06-2009

    Thank God for yourself God made you a beautiful person and he have things for you to acheive

    DeepEclipse commented on The Sullen Spirit

    03-25-2009

    I like that last line. I've come to the conclusion that if it ever came to this, I would not harm myself. I would just pay back pain for pain. Emotional piece

    Bonofied commented on The Sullen Spirit

    03-24-2009

    sometimes we have to put positive people in our lives and do away with the negativity

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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