the thing about you

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    the thing about you





    the thing about you is

    ur fun

    u make me laugh

    u make me feel more alive

    and,okay,you make me

    a little crazy sometimes

    but there are these moments

    in my mind

    crystal clear images

    of you and me

    and how we fit together

    and it all makes such perfect

    sense,and i know what i want.

    i want time with you

    i want to hear u whisper

    and talk and yell

    i want to touch you so softly

    it puts u to sleep

    i want to fall in love

    so deeply with u that

    even when its not all fun

    i can look at u and say

    as i do now

    "yes ur the one"

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    KuKa24 commented on the thing about you

    09-10-2009

    I love this poem. the way u express it; i relate........ sinple t the point

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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