The Unknown

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    The Unknown

    As I walk into the unknown not knowing wind blowing i cant see where I'm going. Every step we take every small mistake as our bodies dwendle from tight to loose. Who know whats out there. What is to come. Do we hide or do we run. I don't know we will just have to wait and see. As I walk into the unknown not knowing wind blowing i cant see where I'm going.

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    Phoenix9 commented on The Unknown

    11-02-2009

    Very nice write, we all have to wait and see and hope we like what we find

    nakia

    11/02/2009

    Thank you. I'm still searching for that great find.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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