The way....

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This was written for my roommate to wish him a great day at work, so there's some internal jokes. He totally ignored it and threw it aside, but oh well, thats life.

The way....

Wanted to write something, that would make you smile,

but it all had to be perfect, so the words they took awhile.

It had to be something, that wouldn't make you frown,

and if you did throughout the day this would turn it upside down.

 

I wanted it to reflect, all the great things that you do,

the way you ease everybody's nerves when they're standing next to you.

The way you carry yourself, even if its just a farce,

the way you brighten up peoples lives no matter where you are.

 

The way you make your chili, and the way you bake your apple pie,

its all these things and so much more that make you the perfect guy.

The way you sit there, with your laptop every night,

the way you change the subject before we start a fight.

 

The way you smoke your cigarettes, the way you shave your head,

the way you put on climbing gear to get into your bed.

The way you do your finances, the way the system dings,

the way that when you get a text your cell phone gayly rings.

 

I hope this made you smile, your face light up so cute,

I hope today you'll think of this, as you're jiggling that foot.

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Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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