THE WORLD IS MAD

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THE WORLD IS MAD

    " THE WORLD IS MAD " Its sad the poor is mad   and   the world is losing  dads dam I'm mad that times had to be like this,who is the savur of this mess,the rich is happy sweet taffie  my dear old  pappy  man I wish I was happy but sometimes living seams like tha end of the world,who really care about me, my wife is racking my job went packing and I have to start back macking at thrity-two dam ,ham,candy yams I can smell but can not see ow we ,my sweet savur ha"ha" I guess thats me I know no one else see what I see or hear what I hear so I guess I have to pass the test  all by my self " THE WORLD IS MAD "                             

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ish178 commented on THE WORLD IS MAD

06-19-2009

I love the way your metaphors flow, write more poems.

poetry911

06/20/2009

Thank you

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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