Thoughts of regret

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    Thoughts of regret

    This chain attached to my heart,
    Is tearing me apart.
    Day by day,
    Beat by beat
    Just waiting, waiting for this meaningless life to start.

    Laying and remembering those past secrets we used to share,
    Can’t you see how your words make my heart tear?
    Minute by minute,
    Word by word,
    Remembering the feeling of your fingers running through my hair

    These feelings I do regret,
    Hearing those words I cannot forget,
    Hour by hour,
    Thought by thought,
    Your taking my sanity, which I cannot let.

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    inkmaster commented on Thoughts of regret

    07-21-2010

    Lost my Sanity to love also..nice write I enjoyed it..I also have a love and hate relationship with H.....Inkmaster

    lonewolf commented on Thoughts of regret

    07-20-2010

    good poem, although it seems a little unfinished. i was hoping you'd say more. love lost isnt an easy thing to get over or forget. all in all, you did well.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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