Thunder Storm

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Thunder Storm

I see the storm coming
it is coming fast
I hear the rumble
Boom Crackle Flash!
Will you save me?
i do not know
I want to just dissapear and not be in this danger
and leave this place
i want you to save me from the storm
Bring me to a safe place
were it will be warm and cozy
I want to stay in your arms until it is over
feel your warmth around me
I can see your warm smile
Your smile makes the storm go away
and makes me feel safe
With you i know everything will be okay
theres nothing to worry about
I know you will keep me safe
I just know.

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Jenn798 commented on Thunder Storm

10-08-2010

I love it it is not that long. But it is backed with emotion! thanks for the read

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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