Tilt'd

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  • Confusion

    Tilt'd

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    eyes sewn
    to velvet impressions,
    as one leans
    to ward
    silent questions.
    simplicity
    caught off gaurd,
    thinking in the womb,
    not so hard.
    shadows dance,
    through mirrors reflections,
    pondering once again,
    on un answer'd questions.
    blooming is a mind so pale,
    breath so easily inhaled.
    smoke screen to hide distort'd views.
    after three of me,only one of ewes.
    confusion begins to bleed,
    on through the garden of numberless seeds.
    soil holds firmly to the roots beneath,
    shaking off one of it's fondlers known as greif.
    dangling here in this gallow,
    not so hard to drown'd
    in th shallows.



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    cutbanksam commented on Tilt'd

    01-25-2011

    very clever in your use of words to provoke images

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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