Touched While On My Journey

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Touched While On My Journey

 

                                

Touched While On My Journey

 

 

At last it came over me,

 the Lord showed me

what it would be.

He said to keep my first title

because to change it

 would be vital.

 

 He said, I gave you morning glory,

 now sit down

and write your story.

 He said do not write of

the birds and the bees,

 say something for them

to take heed.

 

Something about the journey of life,

and  how it  carries  alot of strife.

Tell them to imagine being shot

  by one of satan's men who has a plot,

a plot  to end their lives

 before they get old

Now this is the story

 that needs to be told.

 

Tell them  that on this journey we live,

that life can be lived with positives, young girl

young boy, you are men and women to be

with Christ in your life , you have the victory.

 

I'm speaking to the east coast the west coast

the south coast

 and the north coast too.

Just put down those guns

 and let the Lord see you through.

  Peer preasure is only a name

it has no place in the righteous game. 

Sagging pants, without a belt

can you feel the pain

that your mother has felt.

Look up, not down

happiness will be found.

It's in the earth atmosphere

open up your heart and give

the Lord your fear.

Don't doubt yourself

instead challenge yourself 

To Live.

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MiZZUndER commented on Touched While On My Journey

01-06-2010

I am diggin this poem it has a good message to it and ther title needed not be changed it is a eye catcher!!

rmlee commented on Touched While On My Journey

11-03-2009

I know what you mean I realy likes this one a lot,

Clementinewoods commented on Touched While On My Journey

08-24-2009

We need more people to try to reach our young people. There are so many of them that have gone astray. They don’t realize that the devil came to still, kill, and destroy, but Jesus came that we may have life and have it more abundantly. We really need to pray for their soul salvation. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem, because poems like this are very much needed!!! Be blessed, Clementine!!!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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