uncondition

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    uncondition
    would you still love if,
    would you still love me when,
    would u still love me even if,
    would you still love me if i was,
    would you still love me because of,
    would you love me unconditionally?

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    cmlestrade commented on uncondition

    08-13-2009

    Don't know, might get sick of the redundancy. This was a very clever set up to ask a question based on intangibles
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    baby19 commented on uncondition

    03-23-2009

    i really would love u unconditionally
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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