Undeniable

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Undeniable

Hues of amber gold, fuschia, and baby doll pink dance across your calves. You, on your stomach, I on my side, eyes open wide, to the possibility of "forever love".

Entertwined, we dined
Entangled we slept
Made love so deep, I was sure my soul wept.
And now, I lay,
perched by your side,
unwilling to move, wont cause you to rise.
If I stare long enough... maybe i'll stop time, and you'll be mine, forever love.

Steam rolls over the tops of the shower curtains. I notice not, the heat from the water, only that which permeates from your arms wrapped around my chest. Scrubbing my back, water and soap intermingling to cause the sweet sweet smell of forever love.


Entertwined, we dined
Entangled we slept
Made love so deep, I was sure my soul wept.
And now, I lay,
perched by your side,
unwilling to move, wont cause you to rise.
If I stare long enough... maybe i'll stop time, and you'll be mine, forever love.

Jellied toast, and peppered eggs, a slice of bacon to ensure your fed, you push away your plate and taste me instead.... mmmmmmm.... you taste like, mine, my forever love.

We kiss, briefly, passionately. A kiss that ensures this is only the beginning, and this day is to be continued. Seperately, we fulfill our 9-5, I await, hoping and praying, today is the day time flies by.... I want nothing more than to feel you inside,... please produce more butterflies.... and be my...

Entertwined, we dined
Entangled we slept
Made love so deep, I was sure my soul wept.
And now, I lay,
perched by your side,
unwilling to move, wont cause you to rise.
If I stare long enough... maybe i'll stop time, and you'll be mine, forever love.


We shared something so very rare. Intoxicating, impossible to mass produce, real, true, electric, eclectic, undeniable, undefiable! So.., why is it, a month has gone by, with my vm void of your messages? My thighs without your chocolate between? My lipgloss not smudged, my heart begrudged to admit, that you were my forever love, and I was.... your night cap.




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spbsdude commented on Undeniable

07-16-2009

What a beautiful peom with such beautiful imagery. And the repeated refrain is so well done. I love the line: "Made love so deep I'm sure my soul wept." You have a telent, and unfortunately there are those who only want a night cap. But love springs eternal in a young woman's heart. Too bad we men don't always appreciate it.

oldsoul

07/16/2009

thankyou so very much! i'venever had a one night stand, or the "butterfly" feeling. all of my loves have been rational, and after coparing my exp. with my friends, it's clear that wither way you cannot avoid pain. this was for my friend who just went through something very similar.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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