unfaithfully faithful

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    unfaithfully faithful

    ok i am changing in my own ways..read my poem and tell me what u think

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    i love you but i cheat.

    i'm awoke but i sleep

    i gave up when i tried

    i told you the truth when i lied.

    i already knew the results...but im suprised

    i can tell what type of person you are..and im blind

    always right but still get left

    i hear whats going on even though im deaf

    i can look into your eyes

    tell a bunch of lies

    waste alot of time

    make it look lk it was just u and i

    when i already know theres about 4 or 5

    other different guys that is on my time

    no low 4's and no high 5's

    yea u win but theres no prize

    i want u but i don't at the same time

    thats wh im ungratefully grateful

    and unfaithfully faithful

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    TrueLove89 commented on unfaithfully faithful

    12-05-2008

    I enjoyed this poem alot. I love reading poems i find my self relating too!

    Gizina commented on unfaithfully faithful

    12-04-2008

    I really like this poem, and I understand where you are coming from and where you are going to!

    mssuebee commented on unfaithfully faithful

    12-02-2008

    I think it's good. You are trying to leave a message,I think. Do you know what the message is?

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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