Untitled 1
Crying inside and outswollen red eyes with
tears that will never stop falling
I am drowning,
drowing in my own
sorrow's
Untitled 1
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swollen red eyes with
tears that will never stop falling
I am drowning,
drowing in my own
sorrow's
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oldgoat commented on Untitled 1
08-03-2009
- Short but sweet, why are you so sad? You are so young and have so much life ahead of you. Keep writing, it really is a great outlet for pains and feelings you may have.
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