Void

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Void

I am hugged by blood stained hands,
and I can't help but shiver as I survey the land, It's dark and void of all color and light,
even though I search for it with all my might, Stop this screaming in my head,
do you wish for me to end up dead?
I'm surrounded by a darkness I can't seem to hate,
can I fix my mistakes or is it too late?
I am drowning in this lake of memories,
that are filled with pain and regret.

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Teardrops commented on Void

12-16-2009

You are never alone a wonderful poem loved the flow and read thanks for sharing your gift

WindsOfMemory commented on Void

12-16-2009

i agree. this is the kind of work that should be entered into one of those poetry books. 10 baby! :D

kpeery09 commented on Void

12-16-2009

Wow loves...this is another awesome one...it reminds me of one of my friends though, but I give you 10

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

loveswar09’s Poems (71)

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Untitled - May 1 / August 6, 2010 1
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Slave 2
Untitled - April 16, 2010 1
Curse 1
Guilty 2
Killed For You 4
Eternal Love 1
Untitled - April 4, 2010 1
Never Knew You 1
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Let Me Go 1
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Angel 5
Mental State 1
Russia 1
Disaster 1
Untitled - December 30, 2009 1
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Blank Page 6
Ruined Life 2
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Come Back 1
Crimson Darkness 4
Unwanted Affection 0
I Offer These Gifts 14
Out of Reach 0
Heartless 0
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The Haunted Guilt 1
Whisper of a Shadow 1
Void 3
Child of My Heart 3
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Fuel For The Fire - Ari Koivunen (not mine) 0
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Untitled - December 11, 2009 6
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Dark 2
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Mask 1
Why? 0
Without/Withi
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Nothing 4
Dark 2
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America 1
Jealous 7
Confession 4
Naruto 0
Erasmo 1
Just A Friend 5
Last Stand 2
Guiding Light 3
I Love You 2
Fear 1
Together 4
Untitled 0
Little Sister 3
Untitled 4