water runs dry

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    water runs dry
    lets not wait till the water runs dry...
    we might watch our whole lifes pass us by..
    lets not wait till the water runs dry..
    we might make the biggest mistake of our lifes

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    sylvia commented on water runs dry

    10-23-2009

    If you want to write poetry it has to come from within and you know what I mean. don't be scared to hold anything back know one knows you.
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    frog commented on water runs dry

    05-03-2009

    A fine perspective presented well. The short nature of the poem really helps get the point accross.
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    toxicindiangirl commented on water runs dry

    12-12-2008

    i like it. good use of a quatrain. simple but to the point. :)
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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