Wedding

3 Comments

Tags:
  • Lost Love

    Wedding

    Your voice, your smile, the way your eyes make me melt. You take my breath away with just one glance. You provided me with feelings I didn't know could be felt. Could this be true romance? The love that you show can only be described as a pre-wedding glow. The "I do's" are said, the crowd does cheer. But suddenly, I'm feeling fear. What's going on? What's happening here? Suddenly I hear. "Wake up dear. You had a dream. Hurry to school before the bell rings."

    Poem Comments

    (3)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    painz commented on Wedding

    03-09-2009

    Great twist sad it was not true though

    bandit1192 commented on Wedding

    02-23-2009

    Good job. Nice twist at the end. TS

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    HopelessLover’s Poems (3)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Wedding 3
    Drifting 1
    My Time 1