What is this feeling?

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What is this feeling?

What is this feeling, this feeling inside
It's hard to describe, this feeling inside
No matter what happens, the feeling can't hide
No matter what happens, it will not pass by
The feeling of loss, the feeling of hurt
The feeling and thinking of what could be worse
The feeling of love, the feel of dispair
Just think of all things, that happen everywhere
The people who find it, the people who lost it
The people who feel that they can pass by it
Love happens to anyone, everyone, and all
But everyone has the ability to fall
No you can't hide, No you can't fly
You do have the ability to try and try
So what is this feeling, this feeling inside
It's hard to describe, this feeling inside

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DeepEclipse commented on What is this feeling?

05-28-2010

Life? Emotions? Spiritual subliminalness? Interesting thought. I bet its a mixture of a bunch of things. We are complex beings. Enjoyed the read.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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