what really turns me on ( explicit)

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    what really turns me on ( explicit)

    her big round booty really gets me cooking, when shes tryin to get dressed and doesnt know im looking.    
    or when her nipples perk up when she walks by the freezer, or with a flick of my tongue when i just want to tease her  
    or when she walks around a corner in a public place with a wink and a smile and that look on her face. i know what she wants, she doesnt need to speak, cuz its been so long, almost a week
    or when she jumps on top like shes the head honcho, and rides me hard like a bucking bronco.or when im hittin from the back and she turns her head around. shes biting her lip and making that sound. i had to hold back, i almost exploded, cuz you know my ten inches comes fully loaded.but i can control it. im not a one minute man.we could do it on the beach so we could get a tan.we could do it in the daylight, we could do it in the dark, like a couple wild animals in a game farm park.
    we could do it on the counter, we could do it on the floor. we could do it in the shower, until she screams for more. we could do it for hours, we could do it for days, but what really turns me on?
    she goes both ways                                        

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    Crush commented on what really turns me on ( explicit)

    07-04-2010

    hahahahaha....very entertaining. i was not let down at any point. thanks for sharing.

    poptart commented on what really turns me on ( explicit)

    07-04-2010

    greeeeeaaaattttt....it turned me on just reading itt

    nbosko commented on what really turns me on ( explicit)

    10-15-2009

    that was very Hot!! loved it...can't wait to read some more!! Good job..

    BadBadBear commented on what really turns me on ( explicit)

    10-15-2009

    Hot .. erotic .. aggressively sensual. She's definitely a man's dream. Interesting surprise ending. Great write.

    doctord

    10/15/2009

    Thanks for the support ...more soon to follow. I'm new to this site. Love your work

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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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