Whenever I close my eyes...

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Whenever I close my eyes...

You are the only one coming in my mind, 
all the time when I'm with myself,
sitting here with the stars only,
whenever I close my eyes.

I remember all the fabulous times we shared,
while the halo of the fullmoon,
the sunrise through the ocean,
whenever I close my eyes.

In taken any breath,
while any heart beat,
any move I'm able,
whenever I close my yes....
You are with me! 

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emilyAKAninja commented on Whenever I close my eyes...

05-23-2012

i think you should use a word besides fabulous or just get rid of that word altogether. i really like the first part though (:

ConstantForever

05/24/2012

thanks emily... but there is the word"times" beside fabulous, I think it expresses the meaning... thanks again

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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