where is real love

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  • Lost Love

    where is real love

    What hapens when love let's you down.
    do you walk around with your face to the ground.
    or do you cause pain to relieve your pain.
    what happens when the one whose love let u down com back around
    do you give in and hope this time you win
    or do you walk away and pray it's not a mistake.
    Love isn't tricky,but the one who posses it is
    if we pay attention to both, we will find real love within.

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    mykhail commented on where is real love

    02-12-2009

    Lady, loved the poem, it was beautiful, a few misspellings, don't know if you meant it? It is short and full of love and truth!

    PrinceJ05 commented on where is real love

    02-12-2009

    beautiful

    FoF commented on where is real love

    02-11-2009

    Saw your request on chatline -left to read your poem. I like the way it starts but take a step back and a deep breath and read it out loud the way you put it on paper. I think it could be much better with some editing. I like it.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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