Who Are You?

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    Who Are You?

    I once looked into the eyes of stranger and a feeling emptiness entered into my whole being....For i felt what he felt,I seen what he seen..... Why are you afraid,is it the unknown that you fear? He just looked at me in slience but my words he could'nt hear.Why are you lonely,do you not know who you are? He replied NO!!!!! Please look deeper into my scars. So i braced myself before i looked deeper into his eyes, and i saw a life filled with others deceptions apon him,their scorn their lies. I had asked would he trust me to help him threw all his hell and pain? I had even promised him that there would sunshine after the rain.He said all i need you to do is see as i see, when i looked into that strangers eyes again i saw that the STRANGER WAS ME...........

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    hdmac commented on Who Are You?

    06-11-2009

    Looking into the mirror or something like that I see. Interesting poetry. The beginning left me "empty" though.

    cottonluv commented on Who Are You?

    03-13-2009

    love the flow and love the ending this is good work.

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