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    why

    sometimes my mind wonders why
    we were born to live to live to die
    so why should i
    give a fuck about livin
    if at an instant
    i could be on my mission
    out of here
    wit no fear of death
    my last breath
    awaits me should i care for what
    if it was'nt for bad luck
    i woulodnt have no luck at all
    it makes me fall
    to my knees
    ask tha lord please
    to forgive me
    for my sins
    wit a bottle of gin
    by my side is it wrong or right
    i cant deicide so why try

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    CatEyes commented on why

    07-07-2009

    I like your poem... Are the words supposed to be spelled wrong?

    ccslim commented on why

    02-02-2009

    Ever ask why? hehe great content and flow with the only hiccup in it's giddy up is the f bomb. Thumbs up!

    Melj710 commented on why

    01-27-2009

    I like this one It has a nice undercurrent. It's kinda deep on several levels. Great write

    syed commented on why

    01-27-2009

    u seem to be a lil confused like me ...LOL but the flow and the emotions were good!!!!

    Plot121 commented on why

    01-27-2009

    very emotionally charged and hard hitting but I think it was more one sided view of the world hmmm Robert...

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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