With smell of water

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    When water needed, what is the use of honey? when water not available, how can oceans help? when soul is dying how can we keep the life alive. So, this is how the mankind to think that not to crave for worldly treasure but for heavenly blessings and not to fell in the hell fire and cry with thirst which can not be appeased. Better late than never to realise.

    With smell of water

    Water…

    All I need is a drop of water

    soul dying with unquenchable thirst

    Every cell of my body

    Craving for one molecule of oxygen

    And two molecules of hydrogen

    Blood

    Honey

    Nectar

    Are placed near my tongue

    That smells like poison

    Water please!

    I need a drop of water

    In return I give my whole treasure

    Soul dehydrating

    Tears vapored

    Cannot appease my thirst

    Even with my own tears

    Please cry and shed your tears

    And let me die

    With smell of water

     

                                                              By: R K CHOWDARY

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    sevyn7 commented on With smell of water

    02-23-2011

    Very powerful poem, sev'n....................................
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    RKCHOWDARY11

    02/23/2011

    Hi sevyn7 How do you do? Thank you for the comment RKC

    sanctus commented on With smell of water

    02-23-2011

    Your work speaks to my being; mind, heart and soul…
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    RKCHOWDARY11

    02/23/2011

    Hi dear sanctus Thank you for your read and comment. Any corrections?

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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