Without Her

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    Without Her

    I cringe to think upon it;
    Laughable imperfections 
    Surging into seas 
    Of dark hypocrisy,
    Of things to do to reason.
    The reason to do things
    To show for show,
    Gone-

    And the deep longing
    For the convoluted volition of love
    For she that drinks the seas
    Sees, drinks, or seasons the surging shows
    And perfectly laughs.
     

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    FreeBird02 commented on Without Her

    05-20-2010

    Very deep thoughts. Excellent twist in waving times. I can relate to it essence...

    ginga commented on Without Her

    05-19-2010

    ahh a lovely play on words with alliteration that sings to me. (I happen to dabble in alliteration). A bitter and sardonic glimmer seeps through this poem of a love gone wrong. ginga

    thecross commented on Without Her

    05-17-2010

    A resounding injection of emotion this poem has, nicely done.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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