Won't Live to See

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    Won't Live to See

    I have a dream; won't live to see
    I die to live; death won't let me
    I have a future
    I beheld it at an early age
    I refused the fortune
    It fought me subconsciously
    I perceive la dolce vita, but won't enjoy it
    My alter ego slaves my ego
    Great, yet ruled
    Sees death and blessing
    Opts for death; it best suits me
    Longs for it; attractive it looks
    Dreams are darkened
    Hopes force into 'airless' container
    Sweeter than fresh breath is suffocation
    Now melancholic rendition pleases the ear more
    Decadance wrestles God's ordained
    They say I'm great
    I say i'm not
    Feels the heat; knows best
    Sun eclipsed.

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    ThePen commented on Won't Live to See

    01-21-2009

    This is a gripping poem. Nicely done!!!

    KJULEST commented on Won't Live to See

    01-20-2009

    nice.. nice....

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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