Wrong Door

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  • Confusion

    Wrong Door
    What door is to be open
    Which one of these doors are the one
    what door leads to the right path
    why am I so frighten
    If I go in, will I be gone
    did I do the right math

    As I choose the Wrong door
    my life now is on the floor
    the juice my elders gave me are now in use
    the words of the righteous are passing by
    As I walk through the night, i cry
    Why did I pick that door
    I see drugs and alcohol
    I hear many bloody waterfalls
    My chance in life has come to an end
    now I see and hear the advices of my friends and elders

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    MarionYost commented on Wrong Door

    02-20-2010

    This is good, we've ALL been through the confusion, I love your vocabulary in this one My favorite line is "Why did I pick that door I see drugs and alcohol I hear many bloody waterfalls My chance in life has come to an end." Yes, we all have different "vises" But. We've all had that struggle. Nicely done! All the best -Marion-
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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