YOUNG GIRLS

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    YOUNG GIRLS
    she was 16 her mom let her stay home alone
    she stayed up all nyte talking on the phone
    she thought she found the right guy
    fed in to his lies
    now shes paying doctor fees
    for her transmitted disease

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    cmlestrade commented on YOUNG GIRLS

    08-12-2009

    Good writing, great message. We have to keep an eye out for our kids and make them responsible. i wish all young girls could read this. It is inspirational
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    Gaia88

    08/13/2009

    Thank you so much

    swashington commented on YOUNG GIRLS

    08-01-2009

    That was real deep keep up the good work. Just wish all young girls could read this.
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    myadestiny commented on YOUNG GIRLS

    07-05-2009

    short ,sweet and sadly true. To hear such honest clarity come from someone who is still young speaks volumes about the writer. good poem lady!
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    Gaia88

    07/06/2009

    thank you very much

    Gaia88

    07/06/2009

    thank you very much

    muttman1 commented on YOUNG GIRLS

    01-19-2009

    ver honest and to the point
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