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    DO YOU EVER THINK OF THE DAY
    WE TURNED AND WALKED AWAY
    FROM THE LOVE THAT CAME SO STRONG DEEP INSIDE

    WHY WAS IT TAKEN AWAY
    WAS IT MEANT TO END THIS WAY
    I WANTED US TO LAST FOREVER TOGETHER FOREVER

    DID YOU EVERTHINK OF THE DAY
    OUR LIVE WOULD END THIS WAY
    WITHOUT EACH OTHER TO HOLD

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    rollerderby commented on ?

    01-22-2009

    a nice poem with a sad story. A poem of heartbreak and lost love. A poem of dreams shattered, but forever is a long time and love will find it's way back even though you may feel lost and alone. Well done! Doug
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