A 2nd Chance

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A 2nd Chance

As a young man
I often made
decisions in haste

Broke the law on occasion
most of my time I wasted

Drank things that were wrong
and smoked things even worse

and every other word
out my my mouth was a curse

But I have aged quite a bit
and looked back on my days

and I know for sure now
that I have changed in my ways

I have given up liquor
and now do not smoke

and the fires from my past
are all but a smoke

so I ask of you now
do not judge me from then

I am a better man because
of the places I've been

This world is song
and I would like the last dance

can a man who was once bad
please get a 2nd chance.

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ahardwalk commented on A 2nd Chance

07-23-2009

This would have to be my favorite of yours!! and the fires from my past are all but a smoke.............I am a better man because of the places I've been............can a man who was once bad please get a 2nd chance. just wanted to say those three lines hit me keep written

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

loanslanger’s Poems (17)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Dear Liquor 0
"It ain't over" 0
(Lord) Why'd you drop this pain on me? 0
Life's Confessions 4
33 years (part 1) 1
Am I my brother's keeper? 1
Dear Father 2
gone again 1
Pressure 3
Until the day I was Saved 2
40 days 2
A 2nd Chance 1
Down to my last 2
I ain't the best 1
took you for granted 2
My True Life 1
Take care of your family 1