a boy in prayer

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    a boy in prayer

    one day woke up and walked out my door i walked down the street and what i seen was devistating i saw a little boy pray but all he could say was god and he began 2 cry i walked up 2 the little boy and asked him why he was crying he looked up at me crying and said my mom is going 2 die he asked me 2 pray with him so i began 2 pray and all i could do was say god and i began 2 cry the next day i walked out my door i saw the little boy he said thank you and he began 2 cry he said u saved my mom and then i began 2 cry the next day i walked out my door once more i saw the little boy and his mom i told her what he had said and she began 2 cry i told her how sorry i was and i began 2 cry once more she told me it will be ok and we all began 2 pray and we all began 2 cry she told me how thankful she was for all of my help but it all comes down 2 1 think god really helps

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    vancelemley commented on a boy in prayer

    09-15-2009

    absolutely loved it...you have a very unique and intriguing way of expression...

    federallawman commented on a boy in prayer

    08-28-2009

    Powerful poem, It shows so many things. Good job.

    Richisfun commented on a boy in prayer

    06-08-2009

    Very nice ! wait im crying, well maybe we all could cry together. Its very touching and makes me feel that we all should cry a little more

    lonewolf commented on a boy in prayer

    04-14-2009

    very powerful. enjoyed the read

    WordSlinger commented on a boy in prayer

    03-11-2009

    Lovely Poem, all comes down 2 1 think god really helps he sure does,

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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